This is my first draft for my magazine article. However this is very rough as this is not the picture I am going to use and have just inserted the writing in on Photoshop. However this is similar to how I want my real one to look. The feedback I got from this draft is that I should make sure I use a teenage girl as my documentary is aimed at teenagers and instead of just having a plain colored background I should have either a brick background or maybe a really messy or really tidy bedroom to show that it is about OCD. From my feedback I have decided that I am going to use the teenage girl that features in my documentary as being the other girls with a cleaning OCD and therefore have her holding up the sign in her spotless bedroom that is also featured in the documentary. I still want to keep the logo but have more writing in the corners and have more information about my documentary in one of the corners such as what time it is on and what date it is on to make sure the audience know more about it.
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