Ancillary task first draft - Radio Advert

This is my first draft for my second ancillary task of my radio advert. In my next draft I want to make sure I keep the rule of three at the end and begin with the fact to grab peoples attention. However I want to change my wording in some parts as I feel it doesn't make sense or isn't as catchy as it could be. I also need to make sure that the times on my magazine article are the same on my radio advert. I am going to improve this in my final piece.

Ancillary task first draft - magazine advert

This is my first draft of my magazine advert. I wanted to use dark colours that contrast with the white writing as this shows the theme of my documentary is not a happy subject. The contrasting colours of the writing and white paper she is holding up works well because they contrast and stand out. It is also clear from my magazine advert what my documentary is about.

Images I will be using for my magazine article

This is the image I am thinking of using for my ancillary task. The pictures I took were focusing on one of the girls in my documentary that suffers with OCD, because her OCD is about how much she dislikes mess and how that is her particular OCD the pictures taken were with her covered in mess. Out of all the pictures I took this is the one I think I am most likely to use these.

I will also be using the BBC3 Logo as this is the television programme my documentary features on.

Rough cut

This is my first rough cut of my documentary. In my rough cut I have just put all the footage I had together and realised that it was to much and didn't follow many of the conventions of a real documentary. My next steps are to get a little bit more filming of different people and cut down a lot of my footage and try and follow more conventions of a documentary.

Shooting schedule - My house

Time	Location	Filming  Today	Actors	Equipment
4.00 - 4.25	My house in Hayes.	Set camera up correctly. Me speaking into the camera about what the documentary is about for the opening.	I will set the camera up. My friend will assist with filming me.	Camera.
4.25 - 4.40	My house in Hayes.	Film walking into the dirty room and washing my hands in the bathroom.	My brother will assist with the filming whilst I am acting.	Camera.
4.40 - 5.20	My house in Hayes.	Film locking the doors. Check footage. Pack camera away.	Brother will assist with filming whilst I act. I will check the footage and pack the camera away.	Camera.

Shooting schedule - Outside school

Time	Location	Filming  Today	Actors	Equipment
10.00 - 10.10	Outside Ruislip High School.	Set up the camera and position the actors correctly.	I will set up the camera and position it correctly.	Camera.
10.10 - 10.25	Outside Ruislip High School.	Film Ciara, Sade and River talking about people who have OCD.	Ciara, River and Sade. I will film.	Camera.
10.25 - 10.45	Outside Ruislip High School.	Me speaking into the camera about how long I have had OCD and saying how I feel about having it.	My friend will film myself speaking as we walk. I will check footage. I will then pack everything up securely.	Camera.

Shooting schedule - Public library

Time	Location	Filming  Today	Actors	Equipment
3.00 - 3.30	Ruislip Manor library.	Ask permission from librarians. Set up the camera and tripod correctly.	I will set up the camera correctly.	Camera and tripod.
3.30 - 3.45	Ruislip Manor library.	Film myself on the computer looking at official OCD website.	Myself will be behind the computer. Two friends helping filming.	Camera and tripod.
3. 45 - 4.00	Ruislip Manor library.	Pack away the camera and tripod carefully. Check footage.	I will put away the camera safely.	Camera and tripod.