Magazine article - Finished

This is my finished magazine article. The improvements I have made from my first draft to my finished product is cropping the picture more so it is focused on the girl and her sign, I lightened the picture slightly so you could see the picture better, I also made the title of the documentary bigger and bolder so it stands out as well as adding a tag line. I chose this tag line because it is simple for my target audience but also confusing and would cause the audience to think. The BCC3 logo and the time of the documentary bigger so it is clear to the audience when the documentary is happening.