The main things people think went well are:
- My framing of the shots.
- My variety of shots such as having close up, mid shots and wide shot.
- My shooting material being appropriate to my documentary.
- Mise-en-scene including my lighting and the setting being an office for the psychologist and a bedroom for the casual conservation with the girl.
- Editing so it is clear to the viewer what my documentary is about and what my documentary is featuring.
What I could improve:
- I could hold the camera more steadily at certain parts of the documentary.
- Use better sound with certain parts of my documentary.
What I am going to change:
- If I had more time to film I would re film the parts where the camera is slightly shaky, However because I do not have time I am going to edit and change the sound by adding more voiceovers to my documentary as that whats some people said would make it better in my feedback.
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