Tuesday, 4 March 2014

Radio Advert - Finished



This is my finished radio advert. I chose to do this as my radio advert as the documentary is focused on something quite serious, therefore I wanted the radio advert to reflect this. I also chose to start with the fact because I think that grabs audiences attention, especially if they were sitting in the car and this was to come on the radio. I also chose to end with "BBC, Tuesday, 8pm" because I wanted to use the rule of three as this is powerful and sticks in peoples minds.

Magazine article - Finished




This is my finished magazine article. The improvements I have made from my first draft to my finished product is cropping the picture more so it is focused on the girl and her sign, I lightened the picture slightly so you could see the picture better, I also made the title of the documentary bigger and bolder so it stands out as well as adding a tag line. I chose this tag line because it is simple for my target audience but also confusing and would cause the audience to think. The BCC3 logo and the time of the documentary bigger so it is clear to the audience when the documentary is happening.

Monday, 3 March 2014

Updated radio advert script

In the UK twelve out of everyone one thousand people have OCD and a lot of these people suffer in silence. A brand new documentary on BBC3 follows a young girl on a journey to find out more about learning to live with OCD. After she hid her obsessions and compulsions from everyone around her for five years she goes on a mission to meet a lead psychologist and other people suffering so she can show    young girls that It's okay to be different from everyone else and that having OCD doesn't mean you can't live a normal and happy life. BBC3, Tuesday 8pm.

Tuesday, 25 February 2014

Ancillary task first draft - Radio Advert



This is my first draft for my second ancillary task of my radio advert. In my next draft I want to make sure I keep the rule of three at the end and begin with the fact to grab peoples attention. However I want to change my wording in some parts as I feel it doesn't make sense or isn't as catchy as it could be. I also need to make sure that the times on my magazine article are the same on my radio advert. I am going to improve this in my final piece.

Ancillary task first draft - magazine advert



This is my first draft of my magazine advert. I wanted to use dark colours that contrast with the white writing as this shows the theme of my documentary is not a happy subject. The contrasting colours of the writing and white paper she is holding up works well because they contrast and stand out. It is also clear from my magazine advert what my documentary is about.

Thursday, 6 February 2014

Images I will be using for my magazine article

This is the image I am thinking of using for my ancillary task. The pictures I took were focusing on one of the girls in my documentary that suffers with OCD, because her OCD is about how much she dislikes mess and how that is her particular OCD the pictures taken were with her covered in mess. Out of all the pictures I took this is the one I think I am most likely to use these.


I will also be using the BBC3 Logo as this is the television programme my documentary features on.


Rough cut



This is my first rough cut of my documentary. In my rough cut I have just put all the footage I had together and realised that it was to much and didn't follow many of the conventions of a real documentary. My next steps are to get a little bit more filming of different people and cut down a lot of my footage and try and follow more conventions of a documentary.