Ancillary task first draft - Radio Advert

This is my first draft for my second ancillary task of my radio advert. In my next draft I want to make sure I keep the rule of three at the end and begin with the fact to grab peoples attention. However I want to change my wording in some parts as I feel it doesn't make sense or isn't as catchy as it could be. I also need to make sure that the times on my magazine article are the same on my radio advert. I am going to improve this in my final piece.

Ancillary task first draft - magazine advert

This is my first draft of my magazine advert. I wanted to use dark colours that contrast with the white writing as this shows the theme of my documentary is not a happy subject. The contrasting colours of the writing and white paper she is holding up works well because they contrast and stand out. It is also clear from my magazine advert what my documentary is about.

Images I will be using for my magazine article

This is the image I am thinking of using for my ancillary task. The pictures I took were focusing on one of the girls in my documentary that suffers with OCD, because her OCD is about how much she dislikes mess and how that is her particular OCD the pictures taken were with her covered in mess. Out of all the pictures I took this is the one I think I am most likely to use these.

I will also be using the BBC3 Logo as this is the television programme my documentary features on.

Rough cut

This is my first rough cut of my documentary. In my rough cut I have just put all the footage I had together and realised that it was to much and didn't follow many of the conventions of a real documentary. My next steps are to get a little bit more filming of different people and cut down a lot of my footage and try and follow more conventions of a documentary.